Audience feeback

This is Rosie's feedback for our film. In response to what she said, In regard to her critisism of the 'trip' looking stage, we realised this when we had put the film together and were unable to re-shoot it. As the actor, i was also reluctant to fall over properly, so i take full blame for it not looking at its best!

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I also posted a link of facebook to our final cut of 'Blackout'. I got a mix of positive and negative respones including...

'Maybe that the music cuts could be slightly more blurry rather than cut offs to make it a smoother transition?' - quoted by Sian Angell age 20.

In response to this critisism, the reasoning behind the sharp cuts was to create a stronger differentiation between the two scenes.

Another positive response was.. 'your acting was superb sophie' - Jess Smith age 16.

The final negative response i recieved was.. 'On The Contrary, I Believe The Quick Transitions Grab your Attention, Especially The 1st one Although A Black Fade In Would Of Been Useful, Could Of Done A Slower Transition Out To Establish The Difference Between The Fast Pace Of the Club To Solitude Of The Woods! Could Of Pottentialy Had More Of A Build Up 2wards The Whole Drink Being Spiked Etc! Builds More Of A Storyline! Also Some Shorts Were Good i.e The 360 Handheld Shot Around You However It Pottentially Drags Out A Bit 2 Long!' -Jack Thomas age 20

We could have had more of a build up towards the drink being spiked, but considering we only had two minutes of film to prouduce, we had to keep the film moving so we could show everything we wanted in the time we had. I agree with the 360 shot around Rose being a little too long, but this is one of our main shots, and tells alot about the story of how Rose is so confused to where she is, so we figured it should be a longer shot than most of the others.