Feedback..

The +'s

"P.O.V. shots are very effective"

"Good flow with the music"

"Good effects, sound and acting"

"Good music, continuity, edits and story"

"Really good camera shots and acting"

"Good choice of music, contrast with flash backs and good combination with filming"


The -'s

"The transitions need to be longer, between the flash backs"

"Needs a close up before the second to last flash back of her face"

"Music should stop when she's running away"

"Close up needs to be redone"

"More distressed central character! Smeared mascara etc."

"Needs steadier camera"

"Should have more people at the party"

"Slipping the drug could be better"

"More diagetic sound and suspencse needed"

"Not sure if music with lyrics helps tell the story or is a distraction, makes me think of a music video."


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We took on board what was said in our feedback session, even though most of them were negatives, we were glad people pointed them out so we could talk as a group how we could deal with the problems and if it was worth changing what they had pointed out.

We have decided to re-shoot a couple of things and add in a few more shots. For example we have decided to add a couple of close up shots of my ripped tights, and my smudged make-up to really emphasise how much Rose has gone through and how much distress she is in.

However, we decided to disgard some of the critisms because we found them unnessicary. For example, we believed the music did not make it look like a music video, because the whole idea was not having dialouge to enhance the mood of confusion. The lyrics in the music just helped tell the story of what was happening in the scene.